Version2. The rays will still be in UV Color Change ink, but there won't be anything printed on the back. I tried to incorporate more big-medium small, simplify the rays, and completely redo the shape of the clouds.
This design is being critiqued on the Threadless site right now. If you have time, I'd love for you to leave a critique there. Gracias.
I hadn't noticed anything really wrong with the first, but seeing this second version, I'm like "Why did I like that first version? This one is awesome!" I feel like for it to be a winner it needs just a touch more in minor adjustments but for the life of me can't figure out where those should be. Scott would know.
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